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When she first met him, John Watson had seemed the average man. Average height, average build, average face. All in all, ordinary.

The first time she laid eyes on him, Sherlock Holmes had been anything but ordinary. Singular voice, singular face, singular mind. In a word, extraordinary.


First glances can be deceiving.


John Watson may have seemed plain, but time revealed all the things that set him apart- his heart, his loyalty, his strength- what made him extraordinary.

Sherlock Holmes may have appeared alien at first, but over time his stubbornness, his pride, his weakness -what made him so very human- came to light.


With her being, well, her, Molly never expected them coming to her for aid.


The first, surprisingly, was Sherlock. When everything was crumbling around him, he had come to her to help him hide. Not Lestrade, not even steadfast John. Her, Molly Hooper.

John came not long afterward. With everything falling out from under his feet, he went to the morgue and asked her to help him join his best friend. She'd thought that no one - maybe not even Sherlock- could mend that fragmented heart. Why did she have to keep Sherlock's secret? Her, Molly Hooper...


One day Molly glimpsed John weeping beside Sherlock's grave, never noticing the dark-haired man watching him.

Both were utterly broken.

)oOo(

When he first saw Molly Hooper in St. Bart's, John hadn't given her much thought. Sherlock's brilliance had stolen the show.

When Sherlock first bumped into the flustered new girl in the morgue, he had deduced her entire life story in seconds. She was simply another person, end of story.


Both of them had been wrong.


Molly may have seemed simply a woman in the background, but over the months John discovered her sincerity, loyalty, and her caring heart. She was a star in her own right.

Most of the time Sherlock gave Molly little thought, but after years of working with her there were occasions where she still surprised him- she had far more insight than he ever gave her credit for.


Despite all that, neither expected her to be their saviour.


Molly's constancy helped John keep some order in his world when it all came crashing down with Sherlock's fall. No matter how he acted, she never left him.

Molly may have helped Sherlock disappear, but she never let him leave her memory. She was his window into John's world, and for that he was thankful.


No one ever quite knew how, but Molly kept both men from shattering completely, the glue that held them together even when it seemed impossible.

Three years later...

...finally reunited, no longer broken.
:icondna-the-authoress:
Post-Reichenbach, but I tried not to spoil anything

Two 221B ficlits inspired by and dedicated to the wonderful Morgan Stuart (look at her fabulousity here: [link] ) for introducing me to a new kind of writing. I must say that these were challenging but fun. I’ll have to try my hand at some more of them. :D

For everyone who isn't aware of what a 221B ficlit is, it's a Sherlock fic (traditionally, anyway) that is 221 words long, and the last word must begin with "b" in honour of their address. I wanted to only write one, but all my feels could not be contained in just one, so I ended up writing a pair of fics following the same pattern, and I must say that I quite like the result. They don't have to be formatted, but I'm a sucker for parallelism, and I will find an excuse to use it pretty much anywhere. XD

I know that not all of my friends are Sherlock fans, but to my friends who are, what did you think? Did everyone seem in character?
To my friends who are writers, regardless of whether or not you like/know about the show, what did you think of this? Did the mechanics work well? Is it choppy? Does the ending seem forced? Because I felt it was a little forced, and even though the wonderful :devsamanthkh: told me it was fine, I'd like to know from other people if it really is fine. That goes for the end of both parts, not just the whole thing, since as far as mechanics goes, they are two separate entities. Beyond the nitty gritty, even if you don't know the characters, did they strike you as genuine? Deep? I know there isn't much to go on considering the whole thing's all of 442 words, but there have been greater characterizations in less.

Thanks for commenting whether you say a lot or a little. I appreciate all my comments. :D
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So. Many. Feels.
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~iEpicWaffleZ Apr 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
The second ficlet's ending seems a bit forced, but when I went through just for the story, everything flowed wonderfully (: Brilliant idea to make it a pairing! I don't think the two stories on their own could create much of a reaction than when they're both together. Great work :clap:
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:icondna-the-authoress:
Thank you! Yeah, I feel like the second ending is forced, too, but I don't know how to change it (keeping things down to 221 words is difficult, not even counting the fact that the last one has to start with b! XD). I'm glad that pairing them up works. I thought they were a little weak on their own as well, but then again, I also wrote them purposely to go with each other, sooo.... <.<'
But thank you for the wonderful comment! :glomp: Llama for you! :D
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~the-improbable-ive Apr 23, 2012  Student General Artist
I'm tearing up...though that may just be because I've been wearing my contacts for eleven hours now.

Seriously though, very good, and the 221B format is AWESOME.
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:icondna-the-authoress:
Haha, that could very well be it. ;D

And thank you! :love: I agree that the 221B format is very awesome, but it's also difficult. Even though I love this pair, next time I want to try to make a 221B that can stand on its own. :)
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~lullabyphoenix Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
it's a really nice! :clap:
the characters are well described, the post-Reichenbach ambiance is respected and I like the fact that Molly is the core of both stories as she is the connection point between Sherlock and John.
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:icondna-the-authoress:
Thank you for your well-rounded comment! :glomp: I originally wanted to write one about Molly's view on Reichenbach, but I couldn't say everything I wanted, so I decided to do things from John and Sherlock's view of her as an add-on, and miraculously it worked! I love it when that happens. ;P I didn't quite like Molly at the start of the series, but by Reichenbach I realized that she's deeper and stronger than she first seems. She just has really bad taste in men (or unlucky, rather). So I wanted to honour her involvement in this. :)
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